I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Bonjour Hakeem it is Lacie here. I like your blog post with the two animals Lion and tasmanian devil. These animals are quite interesting to learn about. But maybe next time you could change the font to a different font so it is eaiser for the readers to read. If you had to pick one animal what one would you choose Tasmanian devil or Lion?
Hakeem, some interesting facts you shared about the lion and Tasmanian Devil. I like how you used a red scary font for your description of the Tasmanian Devil as it does sound like a scary animal! Did you know that our Tasmanian Devils are the only ones safe from a cancerous disease going around Australia?
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ReplyDeleteBonjour Hakeem it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post with the two animals Lion and tasmanian devil.
These animals are quite interesting to learn about.
But maybe next time you could change the font to a different font so it is eaiser for the readers to read.
If you had to pick one animal what one would you choose Tasmanian devil or Lion?
Hakeem, some interesting facts you shared about the lion and Tasmanian Devil. I like how you used a red scary font for your description of the Tasmanian Devil as it does sound like a scary animal! Did you know that our Tasmanian Devils are the only ones safe from a cancerous disease going around Australia?
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