I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey hakeem i think you probably should of put it in a google drawing instead of a google docs because i don't think a google doc is good for a blog post but anyway your writing is very descriptive im probably going to watch it after school!
Ni Hao hakeem I really liked this doc because it talks about why you should watch it and because you have convinced me to watch it Did you know i have watched bunk'd before it's really cool I think you could use some punctuation in you sentences overall this is great keep it up! -Aimee
Ni Hao Hakeem, This is Raewyn. I really like how you added a photo of BUNK'D and added some highlights and colours. All about camp sounds interesting, There is a lot of things I need to know! Next time add some persuasive tools to persuade us why we all should watch it. Blog you later!
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Hey hakeem i think you probably should of put it in a google drawing instead of a google docs because i don't think a google doc is good for a blog post but anyway your writing is very descriptive im probably going to watch it after school!
ReplyDeleteNi Hao hakeem
ReplyDeleteI really liked this doc because it talks about why you should watch it and because you have convinced me to watch it
Did you know i have watched bunk'd before it's really cool
I think you could use some punctuation in you sentences overall this is great keep it up! -Aimee
Ni Hao Hakeem, This is Raewyn.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you added a photo of BUNK'D and added some highlights and colours.
All about camp sounds interesting, There is a lot of things I need to know!
Next time add some persuasive tools to persuade us why we all should watch it. Blog you later!
Hi Hakeem Olivia Here.
ReplyDeleteI really like the slide that you made it has a good explanation about way. but maybe next time made some more writing.
Hi is Cole
ReplyDeleteThat has interested me of watching bunk'd.
Maybe do something else instead of a Google doc.