I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Hakeem. I am so impressed with this and love that you shared it today in our class Google Meet. It was really helpful so other people could learn how to use Incredibox and see different ways of creating music. Awesome job.
Hēi Hakeem, I have listen to your song it is incredible. I think it has had a lot of time spent trying to find different rhythms and sounds to make it amazing. I think putting a little more text to make sure everyone knows where you got it from. You could of put the link to where you did it so people could try it out! Is that the only song or sounds you have made on incredibox Ema-Leigh
Hi Hakeem I really like this song that you did it is really cool and its a really catchy song maby next time you could do it for longer its really good.And also maby you could do more of them I like them.
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Kia ora Hakeem.
ReplyDeleteI am so impressed with this and love that you shared it today in our class Google Meet. It was really helpful so other people could learn how to use Incredibox and see different ways of creating music.
Awesome job.
By the way, I had a go at creating one myself too. Check out our class blog to see it.
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ReplyDeleteI have listen to your song it is incredible. I think it has had a lot of time spent trying to find different rhythms and sounds to make it amazing.
I think putting a little more text to make sure everyone knows where you got it from. You could of put the link to where you did it so people could try it out!
Is that the only song or sounds you have made on incredibox
Ema-Leigh
Hi Hakeem I really like this song that you did it is really cool and its a really catchy song maby next time you could do it for longer its really good.And also maby you could do more of them I like them.
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