I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I absolutely loved the song you created and the fact you gave it a name, how artistic of you! I believe you can share this with your friends and then we can all give it a go. Keep up the incredible mahi, you are doing great!
Kia ora Ms Raisin. Hakeem has created a very cool Incredibox. We did that before Chrome Music Lab. I made one too and I think you might like it. Check out the Whakamanawa blog.
Kia ora Hakeem. I really like how you have included your voice as the introduction and then let the music play. It was also really helpful how you had created this and you were able to teach other students what to do. I really appreciated that. Awesome job.
Hi Hakeem, boy oh boy I really enjoyed that.It was awesome how you narrated and did your own intro and outro.I think you utilised a colourful pattern that created this masterpiece.It is a very tricky tool to use, you need to spend hours and hours playing with it.Back to school on Thursday,I hope that you will be there and we can all have a catch up.Stay awesome and be kind.
Hi Hakeem I really liked how you did it in a pattern and I liked the beat of the music. I can't even make up a cool beat like yours. You should add some more beats and make the music longer.
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Olá Hakeem,
ReplyDeleteI absolutely loved the song you created and the fact you gave it a name, how artistic of you! I believe you can share this with your friends and then we can all give it a go. Keep up the incredible mahi, you are doing great!
This is great Hakeem! You should try out Incredibox for more music making creativity.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ms Raisin.
DeleteHakeem has created a very cool Incredibox. We did that before Chrome Music Lab. I made one too and I think you might like it. Check out the Whakamanawa blog.
You've got some nice depth to that song Hakeem. I like the way you included different tones of the same notes.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hakeem.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have included your voice as the introduction and then let the music play. It was also really helpful how you had created this and you were able to teach other students what to do.
I really appreciated that. Awesome job.
Hi Hakeem, boy oh boy I really enjoyed that.It was awesome how you narrated and did your own intro and outro.I think you utilised a colourful pattern that created this masterpiece.It is a very tricky tool to use, you need to spend hours and hours playing with it.Back to school on Thursday,I hope that you will be there and we can all have a catch up.Stay awesome and be kind.
ReplyDeleteHi Hakeem I really liked how you did it in a pattern and I liked the beat of the music. I can't even make up a cool beat like yours. You should add some more beats and make the music longer.
ReplyDeleteHi William. You Know I Just Kept Doing Random Patterns. Crazy Right. Patterns Turning Into Music.
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