I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Hakeem. I learned some interesting facts from your information report which is great. Turtles are so cool and a very precious creature. I like dat the end how you included a picture that you had created. Ka pai.
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Kia ora Hakeem.
ReplyDeleteI learned some interesting facts from your information report which is great. Turtles are so cool and a very precious creature. I like dat the end how you included a picture that you had created. Ka pai.
Hi Hakeem. I really like you information report. I like it how you did turtle and i really like you backgrounds and the drawing and the end!
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