I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Hakeem Good job on your mihi but I think you can go a bit louder then that please but yeah good job and please go somewhere quiter please blog you later.
Kia ora Hakeem. The other comments on here about the background noise are quite true. I am really pleased to see that you have started to develop your mihi. It would be great if you worked on it throughout the year and then recorded it again to show your progress and improvement. Ka pai.
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Hello Hakeem
ReplyDeleteNice job
I couldn't really hear you
because it was really loud
in the background
Keep this up this is allsom
nice blog as well to bye bye
Hello Hakeem Good job on your mihi but I think you can go a bit louder then that please but yeah good job and please go somewhere quiter please blog you later.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hakeem.
ReplyDeleteThe other comments on here about the background noise are quite true. I am really pleased to see that you have started to develop your mihi. It would be great if you worked on it throughout the year and then recorded it again to show your progress and improvement. Ka pai.