I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Olá , Hakeem. I am pleased to see that your post has a deep focus on kindness. The world needs more kind people like you. Tau kē koe - you are awesome! Perhaps you could add what sort of websites we are allowed to visit during our online learning.
Kia ora ano Hakeem. I like how you have focused on people being nice to each other. Lots of negative things can happen online so we all need to play our part to make sure things are kept positive. I wonder how on task some of our classmates are when they are online during lockdown.
Hi Hakeem - some nice positive messages here. It is nice to see you being independent and completing tasks that have been set for you. I liked your colour scheme but felt the yellow and orange too similar, contrasting colours would be easier to read. 'White on yellow' and 'yellow on red' are good. Well done.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Olá , Hakeem. I am pleased to see that your post has a deep focus on kindness. The world needs more kind people like you. Tau kē koe - you are awesome! Perhaps you could add what sort of websites we are allowed to visit during our online learning.
ReplyDeleteKia ora ano Hakeem.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have focused on people being nice to each other. Lots of negative things can happen online so we all need to play our part to make sure things are kept positive.
I wonder how on task some of our classmates are when they are online during lockdown.
Hi Hakeem - some nice positive messages here. It is nice to see you being independent and completing tasks that have been set for you. I liked your colour scheme but felt the yellow and orange too similar, contrasting colours would be easier to read. 'White on yellow' and 'yellow on red' are good. Well done.
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