I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Hakeem. I love how your Voki character has yellow hair. It is also good how you used punctuation so he sounds natural when he speaks. The information you gave is good and I really like how you mentioned the word hope. We can always hope for better things to come. Ka pai te mahi.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Hakeem.
ReplyDeleteI love how your Voki character has yellow hair. It is also good how you used punctuation so he sounds natural when he speaks. The information you gave is good and I really like how you mentioned the word hope. We can always hope for better things to come. Ka pai te mahi.
Voki is certainly something I want to know about! What a neat tool to use. A nice way to get your point across. I'm very impressed!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Hakeem. I really like your blog. And the music you made. I think you should do more music. Because you are really good at it.
ReplyDeletekia ora Hakeem. I really like your blog. the music is awesome. you should do more music. The increadbox was the best. out of your music.
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