I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Hakeem, I like that you made most of the text big and clear to read. I agree with most of these and all of the private stuff, I agree with. Next time you could put an introduction to explain what you are doing.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Hakeem I like that you share us personal vs private in cyber smart this is what Ngakaunui did nice job :)
ReplyDeleteHi Hakeem,
ReplyDeleteI like that you made most of the text big and clear to read. I agree with most of these and all of the private stuff, I agree with. Next time you could put an introduction to explain what you are doing.